Thursday, January 23, 2014

Picture Book Dummy Part 1- Making the Dummy Book

Making a Dummy Book- My Process

©2014 Shawna JC Tenney

In today's post, I will share how I make a children's book dummy by sharing how I am making my current book project, Brunhilda's Backwards Day.

In the next post (coming soon), I will talk about my process of getting the dummy book into printed and digital forms and sending them out to literary agents and/or editors. 

I have had many people ask for me to share more about my process. This post series was inspired by an email from Claire, a student studying art at Plymouth College of Art. Claire was interested in finding out more about my process from getting a book from initial roughs to a publishable project.

First before I start, if you have never learned very much about writing and illustrating a picture book, I would recommend reading Writing with Pictures by Uri Shulevitz. It is a complete comprehensive guide to writing and illustrating a picture book from writing the story to the roughs, to the finished illustrations. The book is a bit out-dated, but still a great resource. 

What is a dummy book? 

A dummy book is a model of your children's book. It is the entire book laid out with pictures in sketch form with the type. It is made in the size that you want the final printed book to be. There is no real standard size for children's books, but 8 1/2 x 11 is probably the most common. Most artists like to include a couple finished illustrations in their dummy book. This book is used to show to literary agents, editors and art directors.

1. Perfect Your Story First

In the past, I have had failed dummy books because I did not take the time to perfect the craft of writing and revising a children's book. It is an important skill to learn if you are wanting to write and illustrate your own books. 

Know Picture Books:

•Know the language of picture books. Picture books have a much different type of language than children's chapter books. Read 100 picture books.

•Know the format of a picture book. Know that picture books are typically 32 pages long. Know that 500 words or less is a good average word count for picture books.

Learn the craft of writing children's books: 

•Read books about it. Two books that changed my writing were Invisible Ink by Brian McDonald and Writing Picture Books by Ann Whitford Paul

•Find online children's book writing classes or communities. 

•Join the SCBWI and go to a local writing critique group. 

Also, check out my post on the Plot Line of a Picture Book.

2. Gather Reference

This is a step that you will be doing during the whole process of making your book.

 I set up a secret pin board on Pinterest to gather all my reference. As of right now there are 393 pins in the board for my current project, and I will add more!

3. Character Design and Visual Development

As the illustrator of a picture book, you are also the visual developer. It is important to design your character and your settings before you start the sketches for your book. 

Design your Characters and Setting

Draw and redraw your characters. Find the perfect combination of shapes that fits your character's personality. 

In the process of illustrating my book, I didn't take the time to design some of my characters up front, which made for boring characters in my sketches. They were not the main characters so I didn't want to waste my time worrying about making them interesting character. I was sure things would come together in illustration sketches. I went into autopilot. 

When my husband pointed out that they looked the same as all the kid character I have drawn in the past, and that this was my opportunity to make my new characters shine, I knew he was right. I had to go back to this step and perfect the characters. 

After doing that, the sketches and the story dynamics turned out a so much more interesting. 

Here are a bunch of cat studies I did. It took drawing lots of different shape combinations to find the perfect combination for my character! 

Here is some of my final character design for both Brunhilda and her cat. 
I also took time to design their environment.

4. The Story Board

Take 1: Pacing booklet

After I have written my story and have designed my characters, the next thing I do is make a "pacing booklet." 

I take 8 sheets of blank copy paper, fold them in half and staple them down the middle (you can also use a rubber band or string). This makes a 32 page booklet. Then I take my printed story and cut up the text. Then I tape the text into the book where I think things should go pacing-wise. Then I read through the book and see if the page turns come at good times. If not, I readjust until it feels right to me.

Take 2: Rough Thumbnails

Next, I make very rough and small thumbnails. I make a story board based on the size I want to make my book. I make boxes the actual size of the book in Adobe Illustrator (mine were 11 x 9) and then scale them down to the size small enough to fit all the spreads onto a regular 8 1/2 x 11 piece of paper. I print that out and draw my first very sloppy thumbnails on this page.

Take 3: Tighter Thumbnails

Next, I print out a larger story board with larger thumbnail boxes on 11 x 17 paper using my large format Epson Artisan 1430 printer(Before I had my large format printer, I printed out my thumbnail boxes on regular-sized paper and taped them to a poster board or large piece of drawing paper.) I place the text under each spread where it will appear in the book, so I know what is happening in each scene. 

Then I draw out tighter thumbnails, leaving space for where the text will go. 

When I do this, I am really thinking about the compositions. I want to make sure there is a good variety in my compositions- close ups, far away, different angles etc. 

If a thumbnail isn't working. I draw more thumbnails on an extra piece of paper. I cut out the new thumbnail and tape it over the thumbnail that wasn't working. Sometimes I will draw and draw and draw many thumbnails for one scene until I get it right. Sometimes I will think it feels right until I start sketching it, and realize that I need to go back to the thumbnail stage.

As you can see here on my storyboard, I have taped multiple thumbnails on top of each other.

5. The Sketches

Even when I feel like my thumbnail is great, I still need to do a lot of editing when I get to the sketching phase. Don't be afraid to draw and redraw, and get critiques from your friends and then redraw again. I like to draw my sketches traditionally with a pencil and paper and then scan them in and finish them digitally. I use the lasso tool a lot to resize things and move things around. Drawing digitally is much easier now with the help of my Yiynova MSP19U tablet monitor

Here is an example of an sketch that needed lots of revisions.

Take one: Here's is my beginning sketch. It was okay, but there was a lot of issues with the perspective. I was going for sort of the wonky-look, but it wasn't working out very well.

Take two: Here I got the perspective right, but there was a lot lacking in the story. 
Also the objects around the room were somewhat the same size. 

Take three: I am finally getting to where I want to be story- wise here. The perspective is working out, and I have payed attention to the overlap, and size and rhythm of the objects in the room.

6. Gray Scale and Color Studies

After I perfect my sketches, it's important to get my gray scale and color studies right before moving on to your final illustrations, or things might get messy.

These were my first gray scale and color study attempts. As you can see, the values weren't working out too well. Things were a bit confusing.

With the help of some friends (yes, can you tell I really think it's important to have a great circle of trust), I realized that it would work a lot better to have light values in the back and darker values in the characters to make strong silhouettes and really make things really pop.

7. Final Illustrations

You can fudge some of the steps. You can skip steps. But you aren't going to do your best work for your picture book dummy if you don't give your best effort to each step. 

The sooner in the process you get things figured out the better. For example, it's better to get your story written and revised the right way before you do the final sketch and painting, because then it's a lot harder time-wise and emotionally-wise to change things after that. It's a lot easier to get the design right in the storyboard/thumbnail stage than to trying to perfect the large sketch and having to redraw the whole thing if its not working. 

The key is don't just go with your first draft or your first thumbnail. Revise and revise, ask for critiques, be humble and revise some more. Don't be afraid to rewrite and redraw.

Good luck to you in your dummy book pursuits!


Rob Smith said...

Excellent post and your work looks terrific Shawna!!

Tegan Clancy said...

Look forward to seeing more awesome art!

Dana Atnip said...

Thank you for sharing your process! I love your work!

Shawna Tenney said...

Thanks all for the nice compliments and glad you enjoyed the post!

Elizabeth McBride said...

Shawna, your work is amazing! Thank you for sharing your process and for the visuals that are soooo helpful! What great things you do! Thank you!

Tracy Campbell said...

Shawna, thank you for sharing your process and your beautiful artwork. I hope your arm has healed nicely. I'll be filing your post for future reference. :-)

Studio Gal Shannon said...

Great information. This is perfect timing for me. Thanks for sharing it and adding the photos as well.

Neesha Hudson said...

Thanks so much for posting this! So informative.

Anonymous said...

Sweet! Thank you.

Paul Weiner said...

I am working on my PB dummy and your article really gives me some good ideas. Thanks

Shawna Tenney said...

Thanks friends! Thanks for the comments. It's really encouraging for me to know that this post was really informative and helpful to all of you! It encourages me to keep trying to write great comments. I hope to follow up soon with part two. Stay tuned!

Joyeeta Neogi said...

Awesome post! Gorgeous illustration. Thanks for sharing your process!

Team RS said...

Great info. Thank you for taking the time to share.

Joe Giampapa said...

Hello Shawna. I just found your blog through the Chris Oately Article. This booklet post is very helpful. I have a personal project as well and look forward to read more of your insights to this process. Thanks again for sharing..

Shawna Tenney said...

You're so welcome! Glad you found it useful. Good luck with your personal projects!

4Jewels said...

I am currently taking a class geared towards writing and illustrating a children's book. We jumped into creating our storyboards-but, I love your suggestion of working on the characters. Thanks for offering your formula and advice.

Angelica R. Jackson said...

Just shared these posts with my SCBWI FB group--thanks for crafting such a great breakdown of dummies!